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Bird Cat

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krik krak

blackbird chat

flip flap

wings do snap

break beak

chirp no more

growl purr

cat bird score

©Jay Mora-Shihadeh

Photo Credit: https://www.pexels.com/photo/animal-animal-photography-beak-bird-53187/

#couplets #micropoem #rhymes

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12 responses to “Bird Cat”

  1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Oh I loved this Jay. So clever and made me chuckle which is a highlight. Of course so relatable around her. 💖💖🤣🤣🤣🤣

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar
      Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh

      Cats are clever little beasts! Glad you got a laugh my friend. 👍🏻

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  2. Jeff Flesch Avatar
    Jeff Flesch

    Ha. That’s super clever, Jay. Love it.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar
      Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh

      Thanks, Jeff!

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      1. Jeff Flesch Avatar
        Jeff Flesch

        You’re welcome, Jay. Always!

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  3. Terveen Gill Avatar
    Terveen Gill

    It’s a good one. And the ending is unexpected. Ouch!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar
      Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh

      Ha! When ya gotta eat you gotta eat ;) Thank you Terveen

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  4. stoner on a rollercoaster Avatar
    stoner on a rollercoaster

    it has a beat. love it!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar
      Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh

      Thank you, Stoner

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  5. trE Avatar
    trE

    Haha! I really love this! The rhythm and rhyme scheme used are perfect. It almost reads like a nursery rhyme or a rapid rhyme poem. Very nice!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar
      Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh

      Haha, thanks so much tre! Yes, rapid rhyme! cool ;))

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      1. trE Avatar
        trE

        You’re welcome!

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