SURRENDER is SWEET #poetry by jay

I wave the white flag and breathe a sigh 
of relief when I realize detachment is gainedβ€”

have I waited too long to feel the breeze
of this flag, waving alone / white in the wind?

Have the roads jagged
turned in
and lost their path, a wayward man’s sin?

I recognize the absurdity to which this leads
surrender is sweet 
I do believe

Silence is master and in love I grasp
her, willfully I surrender in glee

Where escape once reigned over me 
I now saddle the horse and ride free, towards
the silence I longed for and always hoped to see.

Β© Jay Mora-Shihadeh

Photo by mohammad majid on Unsplash

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  2. Bridgette Avatar

    “Silence is master and in love I grasp
    her, willfully I surrender in glee”β€”such beautiful lines.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you! πŸ™πŸ»

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  3. Karima Hoisan Avatar

    Surrender IS sweet and also a very bold gesture…in some subtle ways, it can be a super power.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Indeed it is, thanks for stopping by Karima. πŸ™‹πŸ»β€β™‚οΈ

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      1. Karima Hoisan Avatar

        My pleasure Jay

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