SARASOTA #poetry by jay

the windows are rattling / vibrating 
warrior drums / drumming up battle

the traffic is doubling in immensity
steel thrumming / brakes grinding / growling engines

the vulgarity in population density thickets / then thickens 
gridlock cemented / tourism almost non-existent / instead

new-residential-sales increase / billow / like sails on the gulf stream
blowing in torrents of wind / hailing in the newcomer’s almighty dollars

latching onto our sorrows / as we trail new trails / to avoid the inevitable clashes
the horizon rising higher / flat-earthers swallow / the sunset / drunken beggars / maulers 

flatten silence with hollers / peaceful sunsetters forgotten / pollution increases two-bit liars 
ocean views lost to skyscrapers / modern boxes hatch like turtles on salted landscapes / if 

Hemingway saw this / as witness / his drunken brawls would pursue this / plot an escape / in third person / narrate a way out / I feel a sense of dread mixed with doubt / how long can this go on

before the whole thing POPS like corn!

©Jay Mora-Shihadeh

Photo by Josiah Gibbs on Unsplash

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7 responses to “SARASOTA #poetry by jay”

  1. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    The visuals in this piece are beautiful! I love the formatting of it too, and the metaphors that evoke emotion and thought. :)

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      I’m glad you like it Jaya! thanks for reading and for your comments 🙋🏻‍♂️🌴

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  2. Karima Hoisan Avatar

    PS I know you live there…so it must have it’s artistic enclaves..and neighborhoods that make it more worthwhile.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Luckily yes! thanks for reading and your comments, much appreciated.

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  3. Karima Hoisan Avatar

    So that’s Sarasota!! I think I won’t visit:)…your excellent descriptions and metaphors are like a very powerful anti-chamber of commerce advertisement But really you wrote a great poem about a place that seems to lack so many things…

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Ha! Yeah don’t come…JK…besides spending most of the time in traffic it’s quite beautiful, but over the past year, or so, way too many people. Lots of arts and cultural stuff, if you can get there 😉

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    2. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Btw I love that.., anti-chamber of commerce. made me laugh :)

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