BEATING THE BLUES #Poetry by jay

i fettle the curves in the neck

and remorse plays on the strings of 

my chords

the fancy love songs

and cherub blues you mourn, swoon 

and swindle under my skin, 

torn from a page lost 

in fretful scorn, 

a love-lorn loser who burns

like the scorched innuendo’s

you play on your horn—

a violin singing

a sliding trombone

beat to the drum 

of your bluesy tone.

©Jay Mora-Shihadeh

revised 3/22

Photo by Joel Wyncott on Unsplash

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13 responses to “BEATING THE BLUES #Poetry by jay”

  1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

    Thanks so much for your comments, Cheers!

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  2. BrittnyLee Avatar

    This is magnificent and visual, like a long lost daydream in a coffee house . Beautiful

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  3. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Beautiful, Jay. I love the blend of bluesy sounds in this and all the emotion imbued in the play.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you Diana! 😊 I appreciate you stopping by.

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  4. tara caribou Avatar

    I love this. I love the way you paint with words.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you Tara! I love that analogy, words are my palette 🎨

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thanks so much my friend 🙋🏻‍♂️

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      1. d.a.simpsonwriter Avatar

        It is indeed a pleasure

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  5. Navin Avatar

    Well written….

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      1. Navin Avatar

        You’re welcome ✨

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