BREATH #poetry by jay

Man's breath

everybody is seeking retribution for not breathing

the people cannot breathe and long for freedom

the oppression of β€˜other than’ 

β€˜the other’ of all lands has risen and demands breath

for decades, the lungs of people have receded

not grown, and now, now they demand air, growth, change 

like the mad sea churning, searching for new surf

boundaries shift creating undulating curves

widening the girth of humanity, to build, connect over

mountains onto plains onto oceans onto lands, anew

with change,

unstoppable in force, in breath, in storm.

To BE,

to breathe free.

Β©Jay Mora-Shihadeh

Photo by Pavel Lozovikov on Unsplash

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13 responses to “BREATH #poetry by jay”

  1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    so powerful Jay.. I was just starting a poem about this in my head with no time to write.. nice job. πŸ’–πŸ’–

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thanks so much, Cindy! Glad you stopped by πŸ™‹πŸ»β€β™‚οΈ

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  2. D. Wallace Peach Avatar

    Another powerful poem. In the end, the breathless will demand a voice.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Yes they will! For sure. Thank you so much for your comments, Diana.

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  3. yassy Avatar

    To breathe free is dream
    For most people.

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  4. Benjamin Grossman Avatar

    Powerful opening stanza! The concept of “other” has always intrigued me in art and life. Something I even studied a bit in graduate school. Good post!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Me too, it is humanity’s perpetual downfalls that inspire the message. Change deeply needed. I am intrigued to here what, or how you studied this topic in grad school. Sounds interesting.

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  5. Didier Beaugrand Avatar

    A nice optimistic feel to this piece. And a great sense of energy both in the theme and in the flow!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    πŸ™

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      I appreciate your comments, thank you kindly 😊

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      1. Didier Beaugrand Avatar

        My pleasure πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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  6. Cassa Bassa Avatar

    The united power is unstoppable. The opressed almost always fight back for survival and freedom..

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Yes! Cassa Bassa, It is an inevitable truth β˜πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ»

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