EMBITTERED JOURNEY #poetry by jay

Petals dew

drop

mists of you

form

in light

engraved 

in stone

bled through

dirt washed

seeped 

in relief

peaks 

of waves

crested

the hilltop

battering 

your view

rain of death 

life 

remained 

embittered journey

comes 

to an end.

©Jay Mora-Shihadeh

Photo by Jr Korpa on Unsplash

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9 responses to “EMBITTERED JOURNEY #poetry by jay”

  1. Didier Beaugrand Avatar

    A beautiful unfolding heartbreak. I loved the flow and the presentation.👌
    🙏

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      1. Didier Beaugrand Avatar

        You are most welcome 😃🙏

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  2. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    Your small word lines draw this piece to a thought-provoking ending! Bitterness makes the sharpness you capture in your writing.

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you very much, Jaya.

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  3. Giusy Avatar
    Giusy

    Wonderful 👏👏👏

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      1. Giusy Avatar
        Giusy

        🤗🤗

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