UNNATURAL SWEETS by Jay Mora-Shihadeh — MasticadoresUsa // Editora: Gabriela Marie Milton

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We wedge the moon into the night

reluctant to end the daylight

eager as fire lit on match sticks

we dampen the sun, petrol as it is

danger threatening the sky with bombs

of cloud-nines, bolts, thunder drums

the moon glares at us, laser pointed squarely

into third- eyes sleeping, neglect living like vermin on [ read more ]

UNNATURAL SWEETS by Jay Mora-Shihadeh — MasticadoresUsa // Editora: Gabriela Marie Milton

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18 responses to “UNNATURAL SWEETS by Jay Mora-Shihadeh — MasticadoresUsa // Editora: Gabriela Marie Milton”

  1. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    I am delighted to congratulate you! This piece is stunning, fiery, and I feel it in each word I read. <3

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you so much, Jaya! I’m very happy you enjoyed reading this one. 🙋🏻‍♂️

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  2. jonicaggiano Avatar

    Absolutely amazing piece. I left a comment on masticadoresusa. So well sad. The earth is literally screaming at us. Hugs, Joni

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  3. luisa zambrotta Avatar

    Great work, dear Jay 💜💜💜

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thank you very much, Luisa! 😊

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      1. luisa zambrotta Avatar

        It’s well deserved praise! 🙂

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  4. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Congratulations Jay. Wow, powerful poem!💖

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      🙏🏻 Thanks again my friend, glad you enjoyed it.

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        you’re so welcome Jay💖

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  5. Benjamin Grossman Avatar

    Unexpected, surprising wordage. Super excellent!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thanks Benjamin! Glad you enjoyed it.

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  6. GraceoftheSun Avatar

    Amazing piece. Love it!❤️

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      1. GraceoftheSun Avatar

        My pleasure.💕

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  7. Cassa Bassa Avatar

    Both visually and emotionally vivid. Great work!

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    1. Artist/Poet_JayMoraShihadeh Avatar

      Thanks so much Cassa! 🙋🏽‍♂️ 🙏🏼

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